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I am no professional writer but I have had this idea for a while but I don't know if it is.good or not. Feel free to give suggestions!
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#1
Sorry for the first post, my brain thinks faster than my hands can type.
Some in formation. Sam is 18 and a senior in highschool. He is single and doesn't know what he wants to do with his career.
Meg(she comes in later in the story) is 17 and a junior in high school and is 5 months pregnant by her boyfriend.
Will is the father of megs baby and is 18 and a highschool drop out.
(I am struggling on how to start the story ease give ideas 😊)Sam is in the Apocalypse now, he has to go from camp to camp for refugees because they keep getting infiltrated by the diese. Finally he is at camp June. He has been there for about one month and met Meg there. Meg thought her boyfriend died from the infection so she moved on and a month later fell in love with Sam. Sam loved the child as his own and was ready to start his future with Meg. Meg was feeling some paing in her stomach so she went to the doctor at the camp. It turns out that will had not died and thought Meg left him for another man so he was out to get revenge. He gave her an injection of the infection which killed Meg and was threatening the babies life. Sam had just come back from a trip and when he heard the news rushed to see Meg but she was already gone, he was to late. They performed an operation and got the babies out. It was only in the womb for 7 months. The boyfriend is caught and tried by the camps make shift council. A year later and the camp is alive and thriving. Julie is the name of the baby and she is now celebrating her 1st birthday with her dad. Julie wanders off to chase a butterfly( her favorite past time) when suddenly a bomb siren goes off suddenly which means the other camp near them is attacking for resources. Sam goes to pick up Julie but sees her getting trampled by the crowed and Sam can't see her anymore. He runs out and picks her up and runs to the nearest shelter but the door closes and since it's a soundproof door he knows there's no use in banging on it. He runs to the next but it closes so he runs to the next and next but they all closed to soon. He sees the bomb crossing the sky and know the only thing left to do is cover Julia and hope she can survive. It lands right next to him but he couldn't run in time and it went off. It went white and he saw Meg again and broke down in tears he knew he hadn't survived but when he saw Meg holding Julie he couldn't take it his heart broke he knew he couldn't save her. Meg helped him up and they all hugged as a big family just as Sam had always wanted. There was a butterfly so Meg let Julie go and chase it and Sam smiled knowing he didn't have to work about her safety. He had just now noticed that he was in a flower field, he hadn't seen flowers in so long. He and Meg walked of into the distance chuckling watching Meg chase the butterfly.
If you have anything to add or change please let me know j am open to any ideas.
Final score:
2points
Bisexual Axolotls 1 year ago
That's a great premise! Props to you for being able to write it out in a coherent format, whenever I get an idea it takes me around three days and ten drafts of the first few pages to figure out what's going on. I would add a realistic element to the apocalypse, such as a "virus" that replicates at an unprecedented scale, and instead of simply taking over the cell it resides in, it takes over the organism (a human) and uses the body to find an energy source.
Adeleine unknown (Submission author) 1 year ago
Thank you for the suggestion I agree, this will add a good element 😊
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#2
I have a general idea of what I want. Anything really helps. Basically there is a teenager who has had a normal life then is in an apocalypse, meets a girl who.is pregnant and falls in love. The father of the baby ends up drugging her without knowing about the babie , so the mother passed and the baby is pre mature but the teenager still lover the child as his own. There is a bomb about to go off but he and the kid couldn't make it to the shelters in time so he throws himself over her to protect the kid and then there is a bright flash and he is on clean cloths in a field having a picnic with his love and there baby is playing with a butterfly. The family walls together into the bright light happy.
Final score:
1point
DP 2(DP) 1 year ago (edited)
I don’t understand. Can u rewrite it with better grammer please? I didn’t understand it. I mean no offense and I’m not trying to be mean, I just didn’t understand the story really. I read apocalypse, bomb, drugs, love, baby, and that’s mostly it. Can u explain in more detail? Thanks!
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