I like it, however there is still something a little too peaceful about it. Maybe instead of one hole where her heart is, you could show cracks, maybe some crumbling pieces, that shows all the pain she is hiding under a veneer of peace. Maybe some cracks spread a dark light, some drip dark sludge? Ok. While writing I considered I'm overstepping my bounds. I will leave the comment, because in no way does anything I say mean anything negative. I just got excited, and I carry a lot of pain, so I wanted to help maybe add another dimension to your work. So I hope you don't mind, and if you do, my sincerest apologies.

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