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Kirofe took one of my hands, which was resting on my lap, and held it tightly; our palms interlocked, his hand in mine. It was warm and soft, yet trembling. It was a timid gesture, but I knew that by taking my hand, he was one step closer to feeling secure, and I felt that I had to help.

-Ryojii, Bone Quest.

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i wrote this for my theatre monologue character analysis in first person pov of my character :)

I’m Juniper Brianne Patterson (June for short), and I don’t like myself. People would describe me as average in the way of looks. 5’3”, bright blue eyes, short and wavy light brown hair. I was born on October 18th, 2008, in Denver, Colorado, and have lived here my whole life. I want to get out of here. My favorite color never stays my favorite for long, it changes too often. Same with my favorite food, but it tends to be spicy things. I have a very strange music taste according to the people I know and it can be described as music that goes well with rain. My favorite smells are the smell of rain, chocolate coffee, and toasted marshmallows. My parents are Sarah and Lucas Patterson, and I have two older brothers (Sean and Kaden) and a younger sister (Zoe). Being in the middle of the siblings has not been fun. I often get left out but I’m used to it by now. I go to a public school, and like most normal teenagers, I hate it. I’m smart-ish, so in advanced classes but simply so I can graduate earlier than everyone else. I have Italian and French heritage. I love my lab-pitbull mix Sapphire, she’s the best and she’s four years old. I guess my friends are pretty cool too. I don’t feel very close to them. I’ve only had one friend that I’ve ever really felt a connection with, Isabella, but she moved away years ago. I miss her. And I’ve never dated anyone, never had a crush on anyone. People think I’m strange for that. Oh, and my biggest fear? That the people I love will start to see me the way I see myself. I can be a violent person but only in words. I would never purposely try to hurt anyone but the stories I write are…dark. Speaking of stories, I LOVE to read. I taught myself when I was three years old and haven’t stopped since. I can read about 800 words per minute. Yes, I’ve tested it. This is random but I’ve always wanted to ride every single ride in an amusement park. Somehow I always get rained out. With the amount of times I’ve mentioned rain so far I need to mention probably the thing I hate about it, because I love everything else about it. When it rains I’m not allowed to leave my house. Never have been. It’s a very weird rule my parents have, and I don’t like to question things so I just let it be. It’s not half bad, I don’t like people anyway so it gives me an excuse to not have to see people. And I lie when I need to. Only to not hurt people. Which can sometimes end up hurting them more.

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Dynamite Samurai Koala 1 year ago

long but good.

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“Sometimes you have to let someone go. If i live, it means I’ll have to suffer more. Think of it as an escape. Don’t worry, I’ll see you again one day…”

-Kirofe Aisekuro’s dying words. 2006-2023, first life.

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