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I have a poetry slam for school super soon and I was wondering if any of you know how to write poetry? it doesn't have to rhyme and it's just a fun little thing to try if you have the time!

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" When the stage is set,
And my role is cast....
Shall I dance with my demons,
Before the ghosts of my past...
Till the last curtain falls,
and the spotlight goes dark...
The theatre is empty,
I'm alone at last....."

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    Here's the first and last stanza of my poem Growing Pains:

    When I was four, I used to think that I could fly //

    By flapping my arms once, twice in the endless blue sky // to

    fly higher above the soft carpet of clouds // and

    meet the shining planes and never come down

    All too soon I’ll turn fourteen and // I think that I might be afraid of heights

    Who would want to fly that high when // the higher you go the more you fall

    Down through clouds and blue sky that can’t support my extra weight //

    And I might just fall //into the engine of a gleaming white plane.

    There's more stuff in the middle but I don't like it that much. It's not that good and I appreciate feedback, but please don't be too harsh I've not written many poems before this one.

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    7 months ago DotsCreated by potrace 1.15, written by Peter Selinger 2001-2017

    Huh why did this become a list addition??? I thought this was in the description of my post??? Weird things happening to BP today.

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    #3

    When you came you were so small
    I feared we might break you
    They worried you would be still
    And we meet your contrarian spirit

    I put a vase by your bed
    With willow painted glass
    You stared up, and tried to reach
    But you could never quite reach the shelf

    If you got the chance you took it
    Caught you on the verge so many times
    You looked up as I tried to scold you
    Laughed with soft eyes

    You always such happy eyes
    Squeezed up blue when good things came
    How could you find so much to grin?

    When we took you to be proven safe
    They told us where the story would end
    You reached the vase that day
    And it shattered by your bed

    It’s sitting on top of the fridge
    Shards passed hope of peace
    I see you play without a care
    And feel my heart break

    The years bleed into days
    I count off your remaining pages
    Waving from the school bus window
    I pickup the doctors phone
    The news rips out more pages

    Your not a babe i now realize
    You hear the things from behind the door
    How can you keep such a smile
    When you know such a burning thing?

    You know you cannot run anymore
    Extra sleep is no coincidence
    You must stay behind the others now
    How can you keep so bright a grin?

    The story is coming to its end
    I tried to ignore the shrinking page count
    The mocking in voices
    I failed to keep you safe
    Seeing them take you away

    Your sitting in your bed
    Hooked up to wires and tubes
    I can see “fin” written up ahead
    Your strain to keep open eyes
    yet still you hold a smile

    Your hands so small to squeeze
    So broken, so wrong to see
    When the green die first it breaks me most
    Like a china vase filled with old hope

    Dressed in black, soul breaths slow
    Wet, heavy clouds paint lungs and eyes
    Stiff smiles, seems the same
    The house is cold but nothing has changed
    I take the vase from off the shelf

    The more the tears dry, the more my eyes burn
    They walk by with no concern
    Others like me, the ones who hadn't failed
    They tell me to quit holding broken glass, pour out instead wails
    But I clutch it tighter, numb to pain

    Some young ones ask why I ever had such a thing
    If I knew that it would break
    Why I would risk it on a fragile thing
    Get attached when it was too late

    I see how they have room to grow
    Haven't seen the beauty in the pain
    As I glue a vase back together
    With a smile on my face

    Child, your room is still now
    but I can hear echoed laughs
    Smudges from your hands are on the glass
    And sitting on the windowsill, not quite as perfect faced
    A handful of your poppies, in that cracked vase

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    #4

    POETRY POST!! Here's a poem that has been written by me and me myself and i (another panda- the poster of this post, actually- not me). She wrote the second stanza of this. Ten thousand thanks to her

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    POETRY POST!! Here's a poem that has been written by me and me myself and i (another panda- the poster of this post, actually- not me). She wrote the second stanza of this. Ten thousand thanks to her

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