it looks good right now, maybe trace it all in pen (whatever skin colour you use for the skin unless the skin is supposed to stay white and purple for the hoodie) and make the colouring a little bolder, because it just looks a bit rough right now. And of course, erase pencil marks. Some shading might make it look better and measure out the shoulders because they are a little bit uneven. So far it looks good, keep up the good work