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I wanna be a song writer but in order to do that i need feedback for the songs i already wrote which isnt a ton but i have quite a few i would like to show you.
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#1
This is called Just Dance
This place could be the dance floor and i could be your moves
Just get on the floor and show me all your grooves
This world is a shell its time to come out
So throw your hands up on the air and shout
Dance dance i just wanna see you dance dance
Why dont ya show me how you dance dance
Just dance
This could be our groovy shot come on and show me how you shoot your shot and
Dance dance come on just shake your body
Show me how you dance
Come on show me your moves, show me your moves yeah
This is your one and only shot to show me what ya got so just dance dance dance dance come on just shake your body come on just shake your body!..
Im still working on it but-
Final score:
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My name is Violeta and I am an editor here at Bored Panda. I love reading memes for a living. It’s obviously much more than that, but I appreciate the variety of topics, information, and pics I get to see every day and share with the world! Those funny memes really make my day too. Being born in the ’90s in post-Soviet Lithuania speaks more about me than I’d like to admit. I’m still learning about the world and myself, but I do love my friends, traveling, art, and my cat. My favorite fact to share about myself is that I used to hide meatballs in my friend’s pockets at lunch so I could go play outside. I wish all those meatballs could find their way back to me someday.
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sam puckett (Post author) 3 years ago
my phone couldn't find it. It keeps saying that it doesn't exist
sam puckett (Post author) 3 years ago
my phone couldn't find it. It keeps saying that it doesn't exist
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