I Wrote Songs And I Would Like Your Feedback

I wanna be a song writer but in order to do that i need feedback for the songs i already wrote which isnt a ton but i have quite a few i would like to show you.

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This is called Just Dance

This place could be the dance floor and i could be your moves
Just get on the floor and show me all your grooves
This world is a shell its time to come out
So throw your hands up on the air and shout
Dance dance i just wanna see you dance dance
Why dont ya show me how you dance dance
Just dance

This could be our groovy shot come on and show me how you shoot your shot and
Dance dance come on just shake your body
Show me how you dance
Come on show me your moves, show me your moves yeah

This is your one and only shot to show me what ya got so just dance dance dance dance come on just shake your body come on just shake your body!..

Im still working on it but-

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Final score:

3points

sam puckett

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Juan Hernandez 3 years ago

I foocking wuv it 🥺 I wanna see more

3points

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