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To the trolls--Your "My move at midnight" idea is s**t and cliche. As a writer, if I were building my mini angst villain arc, the April fools phenomenon is crappy because IT MAKES YOUR IDEA LOOK LIKE A JOKE. HOWEVER it is undoubtedly going to BE a joke because this is online and your organization skills suck and its going to be afternoon for a good chunk of people and setting your "grand reveal" at afternoon is comical as you would be losing sleep over something people shrug off during their lunch break. I recommend you to get your s**t together and find something more wholesome to say instead of attacking others before you try this again at a more auspicious time, i.e. a solstice or equinox.

To all the nice pandas--remember to drink a lot of water and eat some food in the next 24 hours. Get some sun if you can. Stay safe out there

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In a serious answer to this post, two suicidal people meeting together and dancing on a rooftop before (planning) to jump off at midnight, only that one of them trips too early and the other falls with them. Is it cheesy? Yes. I am a sucker for cheesy.

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The Golden Wedge, which holds all knowledge, and the evil elf who steals it.

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cheese?

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While I know it has been said that it's not cheese, I have a friend whose DND character is an elf that worships cheese and has stolen cheese before. You reminded me of him

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No, a mechanical device with seven parts. Once the parts are together, you can access the knowledge. The evil elf tried to steal it, and all the parts were lost in antiquity. In the "modern" time, the pieces are being found.

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PAC MAN AND THE END OF THE VIDEO GAME UNIVERSE.

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I used to be huge into writing so I looked through some old drafts for my favorites. I originally had started writing the outline the story takes and realized that that would be a bit much to write.

The idea was based around a girl's brother being murdered. One day she meets a man who reminds her of her brother and then she starts dreaming of the day her brother was shot, but from her brothers vision. Starting in the day sometimes, she gets visions that she's seeing from somebody else's perspective. One day, she sees the man again, he looks oddly like her brother this time. The dreams persist, she feels pain, emotions, has memories that she didn't experience. The ending is where I didn't have this idea fully fleshed out. The main idea was that it would be revealed that since they were twins (and this world is slightly magical by the way), when her brother was shot (something magical happened as well), that part of her soul went with her, and the rest with the man who was trying to take it.

Basically, the TLDR is that a girl's twin was shot and when the murderer was extracting his soul, part of it went with the girl so she was then connected to the murderer.

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